I'm currently reading a book about writing, and its filled with exercises. This is the result of one of them.
March 20
Images of the sky
reflected in melting icicles
(unseen by unseeing eyes)
moving by rote
rocking a newborn boy
Black hat
Black veil
Black dress
twisting in a frigid wind
A sea of mourning
seated on blue cushions
One blue suit amidst the black
(a young man openly weeping)
Silent tears tracing silent paths
cascading down a numb face
pale blue eyes focused on a memory of
Nurses running
screaming "Code Blue"
Blue lips, cyanotic
Fixed, unseeing eyes, staring at the ceiling
Looking down,
seeing Grandpa's eyes
watching from a newborn's face.
Let me know what you think of it. If you have questions about it, the symbolism, the scenery, let me know.
Sunday, April 20
Posted by DM Dad at 4/20/2008 11:06:00 PM
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